naritive

   Hi today I will be talking about my future narrative

I hope that you like it.

I put lots of work in to it...

Rising

One hot  sunny afternoon me and my dad were going to the forest to walk on the

Longest track in the world . 

So we got inside the car and dad said “buckle up so we can go” so I put on my seat belt. 

Then me and my dad got on the road to go to the forest.

Few hours later we got to the walking track.

So we got out of the car and started the walking track.

We started from the edge of the forest.

As we were walking, I heard a sound that was like that I

stepped into a puddle of water then I looked down and I saw water on the

ground and it was rising up 

So I told dad  “there is water on the ground and it is rising up higher”

Dad said “I know”...

I said, “What are we going to do”?

Now Dad answered, “We can’t go back because we are in the middle of the walk track”. 

I asked “can’t we go to the end of the walk track fast”...”

No” said dad “because it will take a long time to get there”.

I shouted “Dad the water is rising higher and higher now it’s up to my knees”.

So dad and Me climbed up a big long tree but the water is rising fast.

 And if me and my dad fell off the tree we would drown and die.

We climbed higher until we got  to the top of the tree

and dad shouted out “My hand is slippery”

then  dad fell into the water and started to drown. I shouted for help. Some body was coming

this way with three jet skies than the stranger got my dad’s hand

And pulled him up on to the red  jet ski.

Then the stranger shouted and said “Jump off the tree and swim to the blue jet ski”

So I jumped off the tree and swam up to the jet ski and it was nice of him to do that for us.

I asked him, “What is your name”

Then He said “My name is Josh”

So I said “That was nice of you to help me and my dad”.

After few minutes Josh took us to a deserted island and there was lots of other people

on the island.

So we got off the jet ski and got

on the island.

But there was one big problem.

There was no food on the island.

So I asked Josh “What are we going to eat for lunch”

Josh said “We will eat fish from the sea”

Than I reapplied “How are we going to catch the fish”

Josh said “We can make a fishing rods with a stick  and wool”... 

Josh said “I have some wool inside of the jet ski”.

I said “want the wool break of”

I said wait “ me and my dad can fish underwater”

Josh asked “how are you going to do that with no fishing rod”.

I said “My dad have a two Harpoon in his backpack we can kill lots of fish 

And have it for lunch and dinner”.

Ok said Josh.

So me and my dad jumped into the water we looked down on the bottom of the sea 

There was lots of species of fish.

Dad shouted “look down there under that dig rock there are lots of lobsters let's catch 

Them”.

I said “OK”

So we caught the lobsters and put them in a bag that my Dad brought under water. 

After we went to the island and cooked lobsters and shared it with the people in the island.

After the lobsters was all gone.

The people on the island thanked me and my dad for catching and cooking the lobsters.

At night I wanted some fruit to eat but there was a problem there was no fruit

on the island.

So the next day me and my dad got on the jet ski  and we added it to our house was.

We were going to dive under the water and get some fruit from the back of our

garden

so we picked

up some from the apple tree and some from other kind of

fruit trees 

So the fruit that we picked up we put it inside our bag  that my dad brought.

Then we swam up to the jet ski and ride it back to the island

When we got to the island Josh came to us and asked, “Where did you go”

I told him “that me and my dad went to our house and got some fruit from the garden.

Josh said wouldn't the fruit be rotten  no because we are going to plant the seed’s on the sand.

Now I get it said Josh.

So we  dug some holes and planted them on the ground so we left it along

For a couple of weeks to grow when the fruit was ready me and my dad and

Josh

picked them off the tree.

Than is saw the water was slowly going

down than I shouted “Dad the water is slowly going away. 

The water was going down because the sun is sucking the water up.

 Than Josh told the people on the island that the water was slowly

going away.

Then we watched the water go down for 10 hours.

After the 10 hours I started to see the ground

So I walked and said to the people on the island  so everybody walked down to.

So I said does that mean that we can go home.

Josh said yes we all can go home so everybody walked there houses everybody

was happy that they Survived on that island so me and

my  dad went to our hose 

We were safe.

I said to dad can Josh come to our house and have some diner “

dad said yes he can”.

So we ate dinner and had a great time with him.

So we took Josh to his house and had a cupatea it was great. 

Than we went to our house and had a good long sleep.

So that is my future story .