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Thursday, 11 June 2020

Writing Ws W7

Hi today I will be talking about what I did this week for writing we had to watch a video
and write about it so here I my one that I did.

Hope you enjoy it ..

Luca’s grandpa and papa were arguing. A few seconds later Luca looked at the  ground and the ground trembled and shook .What was making the ground shake asked Grandpa and papa ?  Luca looked up to the dark night sky and saw a substantial shooting star,  plummeting  down on to Laluna.’ Grandpa and papa looked at  the glimmering shining star. They were flabbergasted to see such a thing.They ran and hid behind a crater .”they were surprised to see a sizable glimmering star on the moon.”  Then Luca got closer to the shining star he felt brave then he knocked the star with his knuckles” then  the glimmering shining star glowed  up  then luca  he went to the box that had tools and other things he got a hammer and climbed up the tipi top. Of the glowing star and tapped it with the hammer. It shattered like a glass !!!      

 


Have you done something like this at school ?

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