Writng Ws W10

Hi guys It's Nathel so today I will be talking about what I did for my Writing work shop this week.

So we had to write about a short film about a ( bird and it's mum ) and our writing teacher gave us an collaborative doc to work on so every body had to put there names on the boxes on the doc.....

( So here is the one that I did for my writing. I hope you enjoy it )..

Once there was a little Piper that was laying on the buttery-golden sand with his mum. His mum flew across the buttery-golden sand onto the wet ocean floor” .He saw that his mum put her beak under the glimmering-golden sand. Then he saw that his mum pulled out food from the golden-sand. He thought that his mum was going to bring the food to him to eat but his mum tweeted to him to come over and try to get some food by himself. So he scurried across the buttery-golden sand to his mum then he saw a big wave that was roaring towards him so he ran fastest he could and got behind some sea-weed. When he was going back to the roaring oucen than he saw a little hermit crab on the buttery golden-sand the little hermit-crab was going the same way as piper was going he saw a big roaring wave crashing over to then he so that the little hermit-crab burrowed  into the wet golden-sand so the little piper did the same thing he borrowed himself into the wet golden-sand too he was surprised to see lots off food under the sand.       

Piper dug a hole under the golden brown sand and hid in the hole”turbo fast then the roaring

waves crashed over his head. He was surprised to see what was under the sand. After that roaring

waves went back to the rippling waves in the ocanes  so when the next wave  came he borrowed

down to the golden-brown sand.when the rushing waves crashed over him. Then he grabbed some

food from his little beeck and and slowly came out of the borrow that he was in. Then he went back

to the non-wet golden duttery sand and put the food down. Then he did the same thing the next day

and the other days too. One day all the other piper’s and his mum was on the wet golden-sand packing

for food but they only got a tiny bit of food. Then the piper’s and his mum saw that the little piper was

getting bigger food from them. They were so happy so they ran and ate some food that the little piper

branged  from the water a few minutes later  he brang a massive sea shell from the salty- water.

Here is a video for the short film - ( click here )

Question - have you wrote a 9 sentence story before?

I hope you like it and see you In my next blog....

Bye.